President’s Day brought us many promotions from retailers, and heavy email to follow. With so much email clutter that week (and weekend) it was important to cut through with a solid offer and even better email design & architecture.
HP had a fairly straight forward effort with a simple time-sensitive resend/reminder. A few comments:
Offer: Up to 50% off is enticing, especially for higher priced computer gear.
Overall Design: Fairly clean with clear focus on the offer.
Architecture: In this email, they didn’t feature any products, so HP had fewer click-through opportunities. With that, I would have expected this design effort to have a more prominent entry point. The ‘Shop HP Now’ is nice, but the focus on the promotion overpowers it a bit. I didn’t see any tests on this from them, but they very well could have been testing various elements.
Navigation: They provide additional entry points, which is great.
The Resend: With the screen grab on the right, we see their ‘last chance’ resend. While the design is consistent, there are a few improvements I would have liked to see: First, ‘Hurry Ends Soon’ is a nice addition but more time-sensitive copy could help. e.g. 24 hours left, last day, etc. I would have made this a bit more prominent as well. Additionally, I would have added an additional click-through element. The Shop HP Now button at bottom is nice, but having a clear entry point near the time-sensitive copy can help.






